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The gate and bell.As I walk through the gate  I hear one creek  Then two, then tree,  Also as I go on past  I hear a ring, ringing high  I look up to see a shinny bell  Ringing softly high upon  The door frame where it sits and waits  I walk forward then turn around  Just to go out the way I came  I heard one creek, two and three  And the ringing bell ringing high  I smiled as I walked on by. The gate and bell.
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A Lone Desert TownI walk down the empty street  It looked like a scene from a ghost town  It was as silent as space.   
A lone dog walks across the street  It was as if only it lived here  The shadow of the dog stretched for miles;  It seemed to be the length of a large mountain.   
I looked to the sky  It was as clear and still as water in a pond  I cover my eyes from the blazing fire of the sun,  I walk a little further  A skeletal remain rests on the path  The bones bleached like the white clouds on this day.   
I trudge on, causing sand to spiral in the air  To the small b A Lone Desert Town
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A dream I wish to meet one dayFebruary 23, 2006 age 14.  
 
I slowly walk around, unsure where I am, all around me is nothing but pure darkness, though some source of light comes down from high above to follow me as I walk. I travel on, not knowing if I gain any ground, but I know I cannot stay in one place. I feel the hairs on the back of my neck slowly raise, and I know something is going to happen, and then all of a sudden I walk into something like a wall. This took me by surprise and was knocked to the ground and looked at it. I couldn’t make out its actual shape, and I reached out with a trembling hand to touch the surface of the object or wall. He feels s A dream I wish to meet one day
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Mission 1 Part 2Silent slowly walks down 57th looking left and right as his hair soared in the movement. He walks into a small café and heads to the front counter and looks at the tender and says in a very quiet voice, “I heard the fish here was quite good here.”  “Depends who says things such as that.” The tender replies with a grin, and waits for his reply.  “A good friend of mine who eats here often, and leaves red leafs.” Silent looks at the tender with a stern look.     The tender gives a small nod, and then walks into the back room, and Silent slowly walks behind him, he follows him through the kitchen where some chiefs give hi Mission 1 Part 2
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Fri Mar 10, 2006, 7:29 AM
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February 20, 2006.

Hey, just dropping by and leaving a few lines for all who are watching. It’s me; Derek and I just posted the next chapter in Silent’s life, known as “Mission 1 part 2” I do hope some people read it and enjoy, *sigh*I am so bored these past days, so much all I’ve really done is went and bought my new Manga, Mar volumes 4 and 5. So now I own 1-5 and it’s pretty good so far, I can’t wait for the sixth which comes out around March 28,2006. Oh, and just wondering if you know any role-playing forums, such as gaia and stuff like it please leave me a link. Though I would like them to be anime///fantasy and I’ve tried many times on Google.ca but I don’t seem to get any I really like. So I’m asking everyone out there to lend a hand is you can. It would be really nice. Also if anyone knew of any Artists who would be willing to draw my Character Silent for free. I don’t have any money to pay anyone, and most people I’ve asked *Looks around* Don’t have the time to draw him, so I’m going to ask all my friends on DA to lend me a hand! Please try and help me, of and read my work! And comment!

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  • Mood: Eh, sleepy
  • Listening to: Naruto theme songs.
  • Reading: A new Managa
  • Watching: none.

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  • Current Residence: Vancover, British Columbia, Canada
  • Interests: Reading, Snowboarding, Soccer
  • Favourite movie: Cowboy Bebop
  • Favourite band or musician: Smash Mouth, Gorillaz
  • Favourite artist: My cousin Justin
  • Favourite poet or writer: J.R.R. Tolkin, Eoin Colfer
  • Operating System: Windows pt.4
  • MP3 player of choice: Mpio
  • Favourite game: Counter Strike, Final Fantasy 7
  • Favourite gaming platform: Play Station2, Gamecube
  • Favourite cartoon character: Bugs Bunny man!
  • Tools of the Trade: My imagination

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:iconjj-dreamworldz:
*jj-dreamworldz Oct 26, 2007, 10:46:36 PM
Hey D-Dawg now i know where you are on dA~! *stalks* :D

Later~
jj

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~Kimete Mar 10, 2006, 7:38:25 AM
Hey, hey, Derek! What's up? Adding you to my list.. Muaha!

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~Bordavix Feb 7, 2006, 5:46:00 PM
Whoaz. Wicked writing thatIneverlookedatbefore. +watch.

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~Sakura-No-Ki Jan 19, 2006, 3:11:38 PM
hey, sorry but my brother got mud on the drawing after i finally finished it so i gotta start over...*cries* i'll do it when i get home from school tomarrow, then if my scanner decides to work i'll scan it onto here for you! :bounce:
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~CountessBloodVixen Dec 21, 2005, 8:40:45 AM
S'up Derek? ^_^

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"I wanted Freedom; bound and restricted. I tried to give you up, but I'm Addicted"
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